Task #1 - 1
The question:
Describe a place you visited that had a lasting impression on you.
My Answer:
I'd say Mecca. when I was visiting Mecca it's still Vivid on my mind how it looks how how the condition that I was there. because I'm a Muslim every Muslim dreams is visiting Mecca or medina especially for copper to doing the plagiarism at the complete our quest in our faith and then yeah I was there maybe 3 or 4 years ago and still I'm happy when remembering those days and it's so important for me
ChatGPT Asessment:
Based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics, here's an assessment of your answer:
General Description (Score: 3)
You provided a clear response to the question and mentioned Mecca as the place that had a lasting impression on you.
You briefly mentioned the condition and how it looked when you were there.
You explained the significance of Mecca to Muslims and why it was important for you to visit.
Delivery (Score: 3)
Your delivery was generally clear and understandable.
You spoke at a moderate pace, allowing the listener to follow your response.
There were some instances of repetition and slight hesitations, but they did not significantly hinder communication.
Language Use (Score: 2)
You used a range of vocabulary appropriate to the topic, such as "vivid," "condition," "plagiarism" (should be "pilgrimage"), and "quest."
There were several grammatical errors and issues with sentence structure, such as the repeated use of "how" and the incomplete sentence "because I'm a Muslim every Muslim dreams is visiting Mecca or Medina especially for copper to doing the plagiarism at the complete our quest in our faith."
Topic Development (Score: 2)
Although you provided some information about your visit to Mecca, there were gaps in your response.
You could have expanded on the specific aspects of Mecca that left a lasting impression on you, such as the architecture, the religious rituals, or the sense of community.
Additionally, you briefly mentioned being happy when remembering those days, but you did not provide further details or explanations.
Total Score: 10/16
Please note that this assessment is subjective and based on a general understanding of the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics. Official scoring may vary.
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The question:
Discuss your favorite hobby and why you enjoy it.
My Answer:
I don't know I feel weird if I'm saying this because I admit that I love work I think my hobby is working. why I'm saying that because hubby is the thing or the activity when you doing it you will lost your time you will get very comfort so you forget everything instead of that activity so in my own life I feel when I'm working or doing past for my business I'm a businessman anyway I just feel lost from anything I just feel focus on my business and it's really makes me happy even if the task is really difficult
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description (3/4):
You provided a response to the question and described your favorite hobby as work. You explained that when you are working, you feel focused and lose track of time. However, your response lacks specific details and examples to support your ideas.
Delivery (2/4):
Your delivery could be improved. There are several instances of hesitations and repetitions in your response, such as "I don't know" and "um." Additionally, your pronunciation and intonation could be clearer to enhance your overall delivery.
Language Use (2/4):
Your language use has some errors and lacks complexity. There are grammar mistakes, such as incorrect verb forms ("doing past") and missing articles ("I'm a businessman"). Some sentences are also unclear or fragmented. Additionally, you could benefit from using a wider range of vocabulary and sentence structures.
Topic Development (2/4):
While you addressed the topic, your response lacks sufficient development. You briefly explained why you enjoy working, but you did not provide specific examples or elaborate on your experiences. Developing your ideas further and providing relevant details would improve your topic development.
Total Score: 9/16
Note: This assessment is based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics, but please keep in mind that it is a simulated evaluation and may not perfectly reflect the official scoring by ETS.
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The question:
Talk about a teacher who had a positive impact on your life.
My Answer:
I will say the most positive impact of teacher in my life is I had a professor on my undergrad it's really she is really giving back positive to my life because because of him I got my first job obviously because I'm working with him I'm doing project with him and then help him to finish the projects. also I just like how He taught people How he taught us as a student that's really good for us to understand the materials of undergrad taughts
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript assessment breakdown based on TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description:
The response provides a general description of a teacher who had a positive impact on the speaker's life. The speaker mentions having a professor during their undergraduate studies and how this teacher helped them get their first job.
Score: 3
Delivery:
The delivery is somewhat fluent, although there are some instances of repetition and sentence structure issues. The speaker also hesitates at times and doesn't use intonation effectively.
Score: 2
Language Use:
The speaker demonstrates some difficulties with grammar and word choice. There are instances of unclear phrasing and errors in sentence structure. The use of vocabulary is limited and lacks variety.
Score: 2
Topic Development:
The response touches upon the teacher's positive impact by mentioning the collaboration on projects and how the teacher's teaching style was beneficial. However, the response lacks depth and development in terms of specific examples or anecdotes.
Score: 2
Concluding the total score:
General Description: 3
Delivery: 2
Language Use: 2
Topic Development: 2
Total Score: 3 + 2 + 2 + 2 = 9 out of 16
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Task #1 - 4
The question:
Describe your earliest childhood memory and how it has influenced you.
My Answer:
I will say the earliest memory that I could reach in my mind right now is when I was a kid I go to the kindergarten with my brother not to take a walk my brother took me to the school using the bicycle and also not only me but my friend following. and on that day I do remember that I standing on the back of my brother and then we went to the students and my friend on the fore of my brother
ChatGPT Asessment:
Based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics, here's an assessment of your answer:
General Description: 3/4
Your response provides a general description of your earliest childhood memory, mentioning going to kindergarten with your brother on a bicycle and being accompanied by your friend. However, the description lacks specific details and could have been more vivid.
Delivery: 2/4
Your delivery could be improved. While you are understandable, there are some issues with fluency and coherence. There are several instances of repetition and sentence fragments that affect the overall flow of your response. Additionally, the rhythm and intonation could be more natural.
Language Use: 2/4
Your language use is somewhat limited. There are some grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of "go" instead of "went." Additionally, the sentence structure could be improved for better clarity. You also use some repetitive phrases, like "my brother" and "my friend," instead of using pronouns or finding other ways to refer to them.
Topic Development: 2/4
Your response lacks sufficient development of the topic. You briefly mention going to kindergarten with your brother and friend, but you don't provide any specific details about how this memory has influenced you. It would have been beneficial to expand on the impact this experience had on your life and personal development.
Total Score: 9/16
While your response touches on the topic, there is room for improvement in all four rubrics. To improve your score, focus on providing more specific details, improving your delivery and fluency, expanding your vocabulary and sentence structures, and ensuring that you fully develop the topic by discussing how the memory has influenced you.
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The question:
Share your experience learning a new skill, such as a language or musical instrument.
My Answer:
Like this practice I'm learning a new language English especially because I'm reaching my MBA on Stanford hopefully and it needs to have fall to pass and I'm not really happy with my score I did in the past so I need to improve my score. so using this speech to text tools I hope I can improve my speaking skills and then I will assess it using chat tpt. for me learning new skill is not never be easy but it challenged me
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript assessment breakdown based on TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description: 3
The answer provides a general description of the experience of learning a new skill, in this case, learning a new language.
It mentions the specific goal of reaching an MBA at Stanford and the need to improve the speaking score.
The response also acknowledges that learning a new skill is challenging.
Delivery: 2
The delivery could be improved in terms of fluency and pacing. There are instances of pauses and hesitations that impact the overall flow of the answer.
The tone and volume of speech are adequate, but there is room for improvement in terms of intonation and expression.
Language Use: 2
The language use is somewhat limited and lacks complexity. There are some errors in grammar and word choice.
The use of informal language, such as "like this practice," should be avoided in a formal context like the TOEFL test.
There is an inconsistency in verb tense usage ("I'm reaching my MBA" and "I did in the past").
The use of contractions ("it needs to have fall") is not appropriate in a formal setting.
Topic Development: 2
The answer briefly mentions the specific skill being learned (English) and the goal of improving speaking skills.
However, there is a lack of elaboration and supporting details.
The response could benefit from providing more information about the challenges faced and the strategies employed to overcome them.
Total score: 9 (out of 16)
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Task #1 - 6
The question:
Do you believe that social media has more positive or negative effects on society?
My Answer:
Yes I do believe that social media have more positive impact than on its negatives. as simple as because of social media now people are interconnected all over the world despite the geographic time and the political and anything we can connect each other we can connect friends from Family that separated away. that's just one big advantage of social media that really useful for us. so I encourage you people to still using social media for those kind of a thing
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript assessment breakdown based on TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description: 3
You provide a clear response to the question and express your opinion.
You mention the positive impact of social media on society.
Delivery: 3
Your speech flows smoothly, and your ideas are conveyed clearly.
You maintain a good pace and use appropriate intonation.
Language Use: 2
You use simple language and sentence structures effectively.
However, there are some errors in grammar and word choice (e.g., "have" should be "has" in the first sentence, "on its negatives" should be "than its negatives").
You could improve the variety and complexity of your vocabulary.
Topic Development: 2
You briefly mention one advantage of social media, which is connecting people across the world.
However, your response lacks depth and could benefit from providing more supporting points or examples.
Total score: 3 + 3 + 2 + 2 = 10 out of 16
Note: This assessment is subjective and based on a general understanding of the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics. Scores may vary depending on the specific criteria used by official TOEFL exam graders.
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Task #1 - 7
The question:
In your opinion, what are the benefits and drawbacks of working from home?
My Answer:
The first benefits of working from home I will say the flexibility of how we work that let's say in the past when we commute to office we have to wake earlier we have to prepare making a trip to office but right now walking from home with no need to do a trip that can press our daily cost. but the most drawbacks that I've seen in my life regarding this working from home that worker now becomes so exhausted because the rally meeting happens every day it's really mending from the bosses meeting meeting and meeting again that's really exhausted for workers
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description: 3
Your response addresses both the benefits and drawbacks of working from home. You provide specific examples and share your personal observations about the topic. However, the response lacks depth and could benefit from more elaboration and supporting details.
Delivery: 2
Your delivery is understandable, but there are some issues with fluency and clarity. Some sentences are incomplete or unclear. Additionally, the speech lacks variation in tone and pace, which can make it sound monotonous.
Language Use: 2
While you demonstrate a basic command of English, there are some grammatical errors and instances of awkward phrasing. For example, "walking from home" should be "working from home," and "press our daily cost" is unclear. Additionally, there are several run-on sentences that could be separated for better clarity.
Topic Development: 2
You touch on both the benefits and drawbacks of working from home, but your response lacks organization and coherence. The ideas are presented in a somewhat fragmented manner, and the examples provided are limited. To improve your topic development, consider providing more detailed explanations and using transitional phrases to connect your ideas.
Total Score: 9 (out of 16)
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Task #1 - 8
The question:
Should college be free for all students? Why or why not?
My Answer:
No I don't agree that college is free for everyone or every student. the first reason is because not everyone not every student can't afford the tuition fee or the fee of the college maybe some of them is really come from Rich people. and then the second thing if tuition fee applied for students it makes students more serious on their study because they know that they spend money as an investment it should be utilized and hopefully can give more money in return
ChatGPT Asessment:
General Description:
Your response addresses the question and provides reasons to support your viewpoint. You present two main points: affordability and motivation. However, your response lacks depth and could benefit from more specific examples or elaboration. Overall, your general description demonstrates a basic understanding of the prompt, but it could be developed further.
Score: 2
Delivery:
Your delivery is clear, and you express your ideas coherently. However, there are a few instances of repetition and sentence fragments. You could improve your fluency and pacing to enhance the overall delivery. Additionally, incorporating appropriate intonation and stress would make your response more engaging.
Score: 3
Language Use:
Your language use is generally understandable, but there are some grammatical errors and incorrect word choices throughout your response. For example, the phrase "not everyone not every student" is redundant, and "hopefully can give more money in return" is unclear. Strive for more accurate and precise language to improve your score in this category.
Score: 2
Topic Development:
You present two main points in your response, which is a good start. However, you could provide more specific examples or evidence to support your reasoning. Additionally, you could consider addressing potential counterarguments to strengthen your argument further. Expanding on these aspects would enhance your score in topic development.
Score: 2
Total Score: 2 + 3 + 2 + 2 = 9 out of 16.
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Task #1 - 9
The question:
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a multicultural society.
My Answer:
The most advantageous living in Multicultural country like mine I live in Indonesia I have friends from any races in our country that we can empathy more we know how to talk or let's say we talk to this person this kind of person how to talk how to follow the friendship and someone. but the most disadvantages is if we do or like human if we have some conflict it becomes so rude it become so hard to solve because the connection between particular culture make it so sticky and it could be fight to other tribes killing each other and that's not good
ChatGPT Asessment:
Here is an assessment of your answer's transcript based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description:
Your response shows a basic understanding of the question and provides some relevant information about the advantages and disadvantages of living in a multicultural society. However, your answer lacks depth and could benefit from further development and organization. Additionally, there are some grammatical errors and the delivery could be improved. Overall, your general description receives a score of 2 out of 4.
Delivery:
Your delivery has a few issues that affect the clarity and coherence of your response. There are instances of unclear pronunciation and word choices, which make it difficult to understand your ideas fully. Additionally, there is a lack of natural pauses and intonation patterns. To improve your delivery, try to speak more clearly and vary your tone and pace. Based on these factors, your delivery receives a score of 2 out of 4.
Language Use:
Your use of language is generally understandable, but there are several grammatical errors and inconsistencies throughout your response. For example, you have problems with subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and word choices. To improve your language use, focus on sentence structure, verb forms, and vocabulary accuracy. Considering these factors, your language use receives a score of 2 out of 4.
Topic Development:
While you touch upon the advantages and disadvantages of living in a multicultural society, your response lacks specific examples and elaboration. Your ideas are presented briefly without sufficient development or support. To enhance your topic development, try to provide more detailed explanations and include relevant examples or personal experiences. Based on these factors, your topic development receives a score of 2 out of 4.
Total Score:
General Description: 2
Delivery: 2
Language Use: 2
Topic Development: 2
The total score for your response is 8 out of 16.
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Task #1 - 10
The question:
Do you think it is more important to have a successful career or a fulfilling personal life?
My Answer:
Successful career of course if you have success career whatever it is whatever you divine what your career is you can build your life you can build your family so if your family doing good your family can afford what it needs it should be your personal life come to greater good better yet and secondly career is how you responsible of your knowledge if you are let's say a graduate student from good University you have to reach good career instead of you playing with in the name of personal life fulfillment that's better you reaching good career
ChatGPT Asessment:
Here is an assessment of your answer's transcript based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description:
Your response provides an opinion on the question, stating that a successful career is more important than a fulfilling personal life. You mention that a successful career allows you to build your life and support your family. You also argue that pursuing a good career is a responsible choice for someone with a good education. However, your response lacks a clear structure and organization. It would have been more effective if you had introduced your main points in a more organized manner.
Score: 2
Delivery:
Your delivery is somewhat fast-paced and lacks fluency. Some of your sentences are fragmented and lack clarity. You also use repetition and filler words, which hinder the overall flow of your response. Additionally, there are a few instances where your pronunciation is unclear. To improve your delivery, try to speak more slowly and clearly, and work on reducing filler words and sentence fragments.
Score: 2
Language Use:
Your language use is understandable, but there are several grammatical errors and inconsistencies throughout your response. For example, you have run-on sentences, incorrect verb forms (e.g., "you divine" instead of "you define"), and incorrect prepositions (e.g., "instead of you playing with in the name"). You also use informal language and colloquial expressions (e.g., "doing good" instead of "doing well"). To improve your language use, focus on sentence structure, verb forms, prepositions, and using more formal vocabulary.
Score: 2
Topic Development:
Your response demonstrates some attempts at developing the topic, but the organization and development of your ideas could be improved. You briefly mention the importance of a successful career in building a life and supporting a family, but you fail to provide specific examples or elaborate on these points. You also mention the responsibility of utilizing knowledge gained from education, but this point is not clearly connected to the overall argument. To improve your topic development, try to provide more specific examples and ensure that your ideas are logically connected and fully developed.
Score: 2
Total Score:
General Description: 2
Delivery: 2
Language Use: 2
Topic Development: 2
The total score for your response is 8 out of 16.
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