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TOEFL IBT Speaking Practice #48

Task #1 - 1


The question:


Should students be allowed to use smartphones in the classroom?

My Answer:

In my own opinion student should not use smartphone in their classroom because smartphone can disturb the process of learning of students.  for example students nowadays became more aware about their social media, every notification they want to click it and if it happened on the classroom of course it will disturb the process of learning and of course the teacher will be not so comfort seeing that happen.  so that's my reason I don't agree smartphone allowed to student in classroom


ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):

General Description: 3

The response provides a clear opinion and states the reasons for it. It addresses the potential disruption caused by smartphones and the discomfort it may cause to the teacher.


Delivery: 3

The response is coherent and organized. It presents the opinion and reasons in a logical manner.


Language Use: 3

The language use is generally appropriate and clear. There are a few minor errors and awkward phrases, but they do not significantly hinder comprehension.


Topic Development: 2

The response presents one main reason for not allowing smartphones in the classroom, which is the potential disruption to the learning process. However, it lacks specific examples or elaboration to support the main point. Including more examples and further development of ideas would enhance the response.


Overall, the response demonstrates a clear opinion and provides some reasoning, but it could benefit from more development and specific examples to strengthen the argument. The language use is generally effective, with only minor errors.



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Task #1 - 2


The question:


Do you agree or disagree with the statement: "Money can't buy happiness"?

My Answer:

In my own opinion I agree that money can't buy happiness absolutely.  because happiness is not about the things you had or the things you bought, it's about your feeling it's about your heart inside deep your heart that's what makes you happy.  for example I've been to go to the vacation with my sons and we go to the beach that not really expensive actually it's really really cheap and I've seen my children are really happy about that so not the money or make them happy but the condition and the circumstances 


ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):


General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear opinion and supports it with personal experience and reasoning.


Delivery: 3 - The response is coherent and organized, with clear sentence structure and transitions.


Language Use: 3 - The response demonstrates effective language use, with mostly accurate grammar and appropriate vocabulary.


Topic Development: 3 - The response develops the topic with relevant examples and explanations, illustrating the viewpoint that money cannot buy happiness.


Overall, the response effectively presents the opinion and supports it with personal experience and reasoning. The language use is generally accurate, and the response demonstrates coherence and organization.



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Task #1 - 3


The question:


Should governments invest more in space exploration?

My Answer:

I live in Indonesia and I don't think that my government be so wise if they're in first more on space exploration.  because in my own country there are so many problems such as poverty and hunger everywhere and of course the education and health issues.  so it will be wisdom for my government to spend on those issues for example if they spend money on space exploration it will not resolve our current problem in our country

ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):

General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear stance on the topic and explains the reasoning behind it.


Delivery: 3 - The response is generally well-organized and coherent, with logical connections between ideas. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific examples and expanding on certain points.


Language Use: 3 - The language used is generally appropriate and effective in conveying the ideas. Some errors in grammar and word choice are present, but they do not hinder comprehension.


Topic Development: 3 - The response addresses the main aspects of the topic by discussing the prioritization of government spending and highlighting the pressing issues in the country. However, it could benefit from further development with additional examples and counterarguments.


Overall, the response effectively presents a perspective on the question and provides reasoning to support it. However, it could be further improved with more specific examples and a deeper exploration of counterarguments.



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Task #1 - 4


The question:


Do you agree or disagree with the idea that social media has a negative impact on personal relationships?

My Answer:

I don't agree with that I agree that social media has good impact to our personal relationship especially for the man who live by distance with their families or friends it can be connected easily using social media.  for example my own friends live in US instead I'm living in Indonesia I can still contact him and I can still discuss with him for anything just true social media and our relationship can maintain and our discussion for since our students can be a continue that's why I don't believe that social media have negative impact to our personal relationship

ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):

General Description: 3

The response provides a clear position on the topic and offers reasoning to support the stance. It acknowledges the positive impact of social media on personal relationships, particularly for individuals who are geographically distant from their loved ones.


Delivery: 3

The response effectively communicates the ideas and presents a logical argument. It uses appropriate vocabulary and sentence structures to express the opinion.


Language Use: 3

The language used is generally accurate and clear, with only minor errors. The response demonstrates a good command of grammar and vocabulary.


Topic Development: 3

The response provides relevant examples and elaborates on the main point. It explains how social media facilitates communication between individuals who are physically separated, maintaining relationships and enabling ongoing discussions.


Overall, the response is well-developed, coherent, and effectively conveys the opinion that social media has a positive impact on personal relationships.



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Task #1 - 5


The question:


Should public transportation be free for everyone?

My Answer:

In my own perspective I do believe transportation should be free for everyone.  because if it free, it will stimulate more people to use public transportation.  for example public transportation is good to reduce our global warming issues, that's why if people more to use public transportation, obviously the bad impact to our climate change will be can reduce.  and secondly about the traffic jam you can be reduced at alll by using the public transportation

ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):

General Description: 3/4

The response addresses the question and takes a clear stance on the issue of whether public transportation should be free for everyone. The viewpoint is well-expressed and coherent throughout the answer.


Delivery: 3/4

The response effectively communicates the ideas, although there is room for improvement in terms of clarity and organization. Some sentences could be more concise and the flow of ideas could be smoother.


Language Use: 2/4

The language use is generally appropriate, but there are some errors in grammar, punctuation, and word choice that affect the clarity of the response. Some sentences could be rephrased to enhance clarity and precision.


Topic Development: 3/4

The response provides reasons to support the idea that public transportation should be free for everyone. The reasons provided are relevant and specific, addressing issues such as climate change and traffic congestion. However, there could be more development of each reason with additional supporting details or examples.


Overall, the response demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and presents a clear perspective, but there is room for improvement in terms of language use and topic development.


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