Task #1 - 1
The question:
Explain a choice you made recently that had a significant impact on your life.
My Answer:
I’d say the most recently had significant impact on my life about my choice is when I decided to resign from my job. because on that day my job is really exhausting I work from 5:00 a.m. until 10:00 p.m. I would say because I'm working in construction it needed to stand by all day long. it is the best decision that I met because for example now I can live together with my wife and children even if I'm doing business and have no time but I'm happier than before
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3
The response provides a clear description of the choice made and its impact on the person's life. It mentions the decision to resign from a job due to long working hours in the construction industry. The response also mentions the positive effects of the decision, such as being able to spend more time with family and feeling happier.
Delivery: 3
The response effectively conveys the information in a coherent manner. The writer clearly states the choice made and its impact. The response could have been enhanced by providing more specific details or examples to support the points made.
Language Use: 2
The response demonstrates a basic command of English language structures and vocabulary. There are some errors in grammar, such as inconsistent verb tenses and missing articles. The use of more varied vocabulary and sentence structures would have improved the language use.
Topic Development: 3
The response addresses the prompt by explaining a recent choice and its impact on the writer's life. It discusses the decision to resign from a job due to long working hours and the resulting positive effects on family life and happiness. The response could have been further developed by providing more specific examples or details to illustrate the impact of the choice.
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Task #1 - 2
The question:
Explain a choice you would make if you could travel back in time to any historical event.
My Answer:
If I could travel back in time in my own timeline I will go back into my undergrad School. on that day I don't even learn any coding but now calling it's really demanding skill on the market right now no matter who you are no matter what jobs you are calling it's really important. by now I'm not really good at calling even if I am trying to learn it but I think I waste my time that didn't learn calling at my undergrad. because in undergrad I have many supporting system
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3
The response generally addresses the question and provides an explanation of the choice to travel back in time to the author's undergraduate school. However, it lacks some specific details and could benefit from further development.
Delivery: 2
The response is somewhat disorganized and lacks coherence. The ideas are not well-structured, and the connection between sentences is weak. The response could be improved by organizing the information more effectively and using transitions to connect ideas.
Language Use: 2.5
The language use is adequate, but there are some errors in grammar, word choice, and sentence structure. The response could be enhanced by using more varied vocabulary, improving sentence structure, and correcting errors.
Topic Development: 2.5
The response provides a basic explanation of the choice to travel back in time to the author's undergraduate school, highlighting the importance of coding skills in today's job market. However, the response lacks specific details and examples to fully develop the topic. Further elaboration on the supporting systems available during the author's undergraduate years and the potential benefits of learning coding would enhance the topic development.
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Task #1 - 3
The question:
Explain a choice you would make if you could have any superpower.
My Answer:
If I could have any super power I will choose that I can fly like a Superman. it's because I think that commute or do a travel is wasting my time I just want to get to another place in really short time by then I can effective my time and I can do any other jobs dad really impactful to my life instead of just staying on the car or on the train or no airplane. that's the superpower that I could have if I had to choose
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear answer to the question and explains the choice of having the superpower to fly like Superman. The reasoning is focused on saving time during commute and travel, which is considered a waste of time.
Delivery: 3 - The response effectively communicates the choice and its rationale. The ideas are presented in a logical manner, and the overall response is coherent and easy to follow.
Language Use: 3 - The language used in the response is generally appropriate and clear. There are a few minor errors in grammar and punctuation, but they do not hinder understanding. Some varied vocabulary and sentence structures are used, demonstrating a good command of language.
Topic Development: 3 - The response provides adequate development of the topic by explaining the choice of the superpower and its potential impact on the individual's life. The idea of time efficiency is elaborated upon, although some additional details or examples could further enhance the response.
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Task #1 - 4
The question:
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: "It's better to work in a team than individually"?
My Answer:
Absolutely I agree that we have to work in a team is better than individually. just because working in a team is really demanding skill right now nowadays and among a team there is there are many perspective that good for our task and our jobs to get it better. for example I've done some work in my own personal work and then I bring it to my team and I know something missing from my team because of my team open up my eyes regarding something that I didn't talk before I couldn't even see it
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 4
The response demonstrates a clear understanding of the question and presents a clear stance on the topic. The writer agrees that working in a team is better than working individually and provides a personal example to support their point of view.
Delivery: 3
The response is generally coherent and well-organized. The writer effectively conveys their ideas and supports their viewpoint. However, there are a few instances of awkward phrasing and grammar errors that slightly impact the overall delivery.
Language Use: 3
The writer demonstrates a satisfactory command of language, with a range of vocabulary and appropriate word choices. While there are some errors in grammar and sentence structure, they do not significantly hinder communication.
Topic Development: 4
The response effectively develops the topic by providing a personal example and explaining how working in a team can enhance one's perspective and improve the quality of work. The example illustrates the writer's point and adds depth to the response.
Overall, the response receives a score of 3.5 out of 4. It provides a clear stance on the topic, supports it with relevant examples, and demonstrates a satisfactory command of language.
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Task #1 - 5
The question:
Describe a choice you would make if you were given the opportunity to start your own business.
My Answer:
Actually I'm a businessman right now so I really grateful that I decided this 7 years ago. because of this decision I can live my life happily even if I work really hard let's say I think of my business 24 hours a day but I can close to my wife and close to my children and somehow we can spend time together do vacation in front of my laptop so I can still working while I'm doing holiday
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