Task #1 - 1
The question:
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: "It is better to study alone than in a group."
My Answer:
Yes I agree that study alone for students is better than in a group. it because if you are studying alone you can find what materials you need to drill more or by yourself and also you can skip the materials that really easy for you but if you are in a group you have to wait for others or others have to wait with you. For example I have done in my undergrad school that when I am in a group for a study for exam I find myself not so comfortable because all of my friends already move forward instead I am. so that's why I do prefer study alone then in a group
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear stance and supports it with reasoning and personal experience. The answer addresses the question and stays on topic throughout.
Delivery: 3 - The response is coherent and organized, with clear progression of ideas. The writing style is appropriate and effective, utilizing simple and compound sentences.
Language Use: 3 - The language use is generally accurate, with minor errors and occasional lack of variety in vocabulary. There is effective use of cohesive devices to connect ideas.
Topic Development: 3 - The response demonstrates a good level of development by providing specific examples and elaborating on the reasons. The ideas are relevant and connected, supporting the main argument effectively.
Overall, the response is well-structured and provides a clear opinion supported by reasons and personal experience. The language use is generally accurate, although there could be some improvements in vocabulary and variety. The response demonstrates good topic development with specific examples.
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Task #1 - 2
The question:
Explain your preference for living in a big city or a small town.
My Answer:
Nowadays I do prefer to live in small town instead of big city. it because by now I can do all my tasks remotely I can do a meeting with my colleague my inferiors and my superior remotely from my home, thank you for technology for that, because now it's easier for us to do online meeting. for example I have really meeting with my clients and my boss and if I do it on office I couldn't make it because the office between my boss and my client is so distant. that's why I do much live in small town right now
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 2 - The response provides a clear preference for living in a small town and supports it with a reason related to remote work. However, the response lacks further elaboration or additional reasons for the preference.
Delivery: 2 - The response is somewhat disorganized and lacks a clear progression of ideas. There are some run-on sentences and awkward phrasing that could be improved.
Language Use: 2 - The language use has some errors and lacks variety. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, word choice, and sentence structure. The response could benefit from more varied vocabulary and improved sentence construction.
Topic Development: 2 - While the response mentions a preference for living in a small town and provides a reason related to remote work, it lacks further development or supporting details. There is a missed opportunity to discuss other potential advantages or disadvantages of living in a big city or a small town.
Overall, the response addresses the question but lacks sufficient development and organization. The language use could be improved for clarity and accuracy. The response would benefit from providing more detailed reasons and examples to support the preference for living in a small town.
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Task #1 - 3
The question:
Do you think it's important for students to have part-time jobs while studying in university?
My Answer:
Absolutely I encourage people or students who studying in undergrad to do part-time jobs. it's because when you doing part-time jobs you can learn how to take a real responsibility instead of in the class, moreover you can earn some money to support your students life. for example for I done part-time job while I'm doing undergrad school with my professor I do some task of him and help him and I got money from that and I can buy something that I appreciate me because of that. That is why I encourage students to do part-time jobs while studying in University.
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear stance in favor of students having part-time jobs while studying in university. It supports the stance with reasoning and personal experience. The answer addresses the question and stays on topic throughout.
Delivery: 3 - The response is coherent and organized, with a clear progression of ideas. The writing style is appropriate and effective, utilizing simple and compound sentences.
Language Use: 3 - The language use is generally accurate, with minor errors and occasional lack of variety in vocabulary. There is effective use of cohesive devices to connect ideas.
Topic Development: 3 - The response demonstrates a good level of development by providing specific examples and elaborating on the reasons. The ideas are relevant and connected, supporting the main argument effectively.
Overall, the response is well-structured and provides a clear opinion supported by reasons and personal experience. The language use is generally accurate, although there could be some improvements in vocabulary and variety. The response demonstrates good topic development with specific examples.
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Task #1 - 4
The question:
Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of online shopping.
My Answer:
For online shopping I can see some benefits the most beneficial is when you do shopping you no need to go outside you know need to go to the place where the things you want to buy in so you can reduce your cost of Transportation. and then for the drawbacks I think many frogs happen such as if you are looking for something online and when it's arrived it not even meet your expectation so it can be no good experience for you.
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 2 - The response attempts to address the benefits and drawbacks of online shopping but lacks a clear and detailed discussion of both sides. The response focuses more on the benefits and only briefly mentions one drawback.
Delivery: 2 - The response is somewhat disorganized and lacks a clear progression of ideas. There are some incomplete sentences and errors in sentence structure.
Language Use: 2 - The language use has some errors and lacks variety. There are issues with sentence structure, word choice, and subject-verb agreement. The response could benefit from more varied vocabulary and improved sentence construction.
Topic Development: 2 - While the response mentions a benefit of online shopping related to convenience and cost reduction, it only briefly mentions one drawback without elaboration. The response lacks specific examples or further development of the benefits and drawbacks.
Overall, the response partially addresses the question but lacks sufficient development and organization. The language use could be improved for clarity and accuracy. The response would benefit from providing more detailed and balanced discussions of the benefits and drawbacks of online shopping, with specific examples to support the points made.
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Task #1 - 5
The question:
Do you agree or disagree with the idea that technology has made our lives easier?
My Answer:
I'd say technology made our lives much easier than ever. it because we're in the technology that now we can learn something not only on the book but also all over the world, we can meet someone all over the world, and also we can find courses through online not only in our local. for example I've done some several courses in business all trough the internet that helped me a lot to doing my business. that's Why I think technology made our lives easier
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear stance in agreement with the idea that technology has made our lives easier. It supports the stance with reasoning and personal experience. The answer addresses the question and stays on topic throughout.
Delivery: 3 - The response is coherent and organized, with a clear progression of ideas. The writing style is appropriate and effective, utilizing simple and compound sentences.
Language Use: 3 - The language use is generally accurate, with minor errors and occasional lack of variety in vocabulary. There is effective use of cohesive devices to connect ideas.
Topic Development: 3 - The response demonstrates a good level of development by providing specific examples and elaborating on the reasons. The ideas are relevant and connected, supporting the main argument effectively.
Overall, the response is well-structured and provides a clear opinion supported by reasons and personal experience. The language use is generally accurate, although there could be some improvements in vocabulary and variety. The response demonstrates good topic development with specific examples.
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Task #1 - 6
The question:
Explain your opinion on whether it is better to travel abroad or explore your own country.
My Answer:
I think better travel abroad instead of our own country. it's because if you are traveling abroad all over the world we can see not only the nature, the building or museum but also we can learn the local culture that can help to improve our empathy in social life. for example I met people that had vacation to the Muslim country, learn how the local culture is and by now she understand what the perspective about the muslim. that's why explore abroad is better than our own country
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear opinion on the preference for traveling abroad and supports it with reasoning related to experiencing different cultures. The answer addresses the question and stays on topic throughout.
Delivery: 3 - The response is coherent and organized, with a clear progression of ideas. The writing style is appropriate and effective, utilizing simple and compound sentences.
Language Use: 3 - The language use is generally accurate, with minor errors and occasional lack of variety in vocabulary. There is effective use of cohesive devices to connect ideas.
Topic Development: 3 - The response demonstrates a good level of development by providing specific examples and elaborating on the reasons. The ideas are relevant and connected, supporting the main argument effectively.
Overall, the response is well-structured and provides a clear opinion supported by reasons. The language use is generally accurate, although there could be some improvements in vocabulary and variety. The response demonstrates good topic development with specific examples.
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Task #1 -7
The question:
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using social media platforms.
My Answer:
Social media platform has controversies and I'd say they are have some advantages and several disadvantages. what the most advantage is we can connect each other all over the world friends and family through social media. and on the other hand the most disadvantage that I have seen in a real life that people comparing themselves into others on social media, it can reduce the self-esteem and not good for mental health especially for children or adolescents. the thing is we have to balance how to use social media because we have to educate our children to use social media on wisdom
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3 - The response provides a balanced discussion of the advantages and disadvantages of using social media platforms. It acknowledges both sides and provides specific examples. The answer addresses the question and stays on topic throughout.
Delivery: 3 - The response is coherent and organized, with a clear progression of ideas. The writing style is appropriate and effective, utilizing simple and compound sentences.
Language Use: 3 - The language use is generally accurate, with minor errors and occasional lack of variety in vocabulary. There is effective use of cohesive devices to connect ideas.
Topic Development: 3 - The response demonstrates a good level of development by discussing both advantages and disadvantages of using social media platforms. The examples provided support the points made and add depth to the discussion.
Overall, the response is well-structured and provides a balanced view of the advantages and disadvantages of using social media platforms. The language use is generally accurate, although there could be some improvements in vocabulary and variety. The response demonstrates good topic development with specific examples.
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Task #1 - 8
The question:
Do you think it's important for children to learn a second language at a young age?
My Answer:
For now in this technology I don't think that children has to learn second language in young age because language is a hard skill that can fulfill using technology nowadays you can translate easily our talk into other language or our writing into other language really really easy. the most important thing the young age have to learn is the creativity or other thing than second language. learning second language can be easily done when get adolescence or getting more mature
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 2 - The response provides a clear opinion on the importance of children learning a second language at a young age. However, the reasoning provided focuses on the availability of translation technology and suggests that language learning can be delayed until adolescence. The response lacks a more detailed discussion of potential benefits or disadvantages of early language learning.
Delivery: 2 - The response is somewhat disorganized and lacks a clear progression of ideas. There are some incomplete sentences and errors in sentence structure.
Language Use: 2 - The language use has some errors and lacks variety. There are issues with sentence structure, word choice, and subject-verb agreement. The response could benefit from more varied vocabulary and improved sentence construction.
Topic Development: 2 - While the response states a clear opinion on the importance of learning a second language at a young age, the reasoning provided lacks depth and supporting examples. The response could benefit from discussing potential benefits of early language learning and acknowledging counterarguments.
Overall, the response partially addresses the question but lacks sufficient development and organization. The language use could be improved for clarity and accuracy. The response would benefit from providing more detailed reasoning and examples to support the opinion on children learning a second language at a young age, while also considering potential counterarguments.
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Task #1 - 9
The question:
Explain your preference for studying abroad or studying in your home country.
My Answer:
I prefer to studying abroad for graduate school but for undergrad of course I do prefer studying in my home country. why I do prefer study abroad because I have to learn why them perspective if I learn in the local culture I can train or exercise my empathy sense that good for me in real life or jobs and business. and the reason why in undergrads should in our home country because it can build our maturity if we are in our country
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3
The response provides a clear preference for studying abroad for graduate school and studying in the home country for undergraduate studies. The reasons for each preference are briefly mentioned.
Delivery: 3
The response is well-organized and coherent. The ideas are presented logically, with a clear distinction between studying abroad for graduate school and studying in the home country for undergrad. However, some sentences are not grammatically correct or are missing words, which affects the overall delivery.
Language Use: 2
The language use is generally effective, but there are several grammatical errors and incomplete sentences that hinder clarity. The vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of certain phrases. Some improvement is needed in terms of grammar and sentence structure.
Topic Development: 2
The response provides some reasoning for the preferences but lacks depth and elaboration. The ideas could be expanded further to provide more support and explanation for the chosen preferences. Additionally, the response could include examples or personal experiences to enhance the topic development.
Overall, the response demonstrates a basic understanding of the topic but could benefit from improved language use, better organization, and more developed arguments.
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Task #1 - 10
The question:
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: "It is better to learn from experience than from books."
My Answer:
Yes I do agree that learn from experience much more better than in a books because if you are doing something and then you get it wrong it can be sticky on your mind Everlasting on your mind and it's good for your life so in the future you will not doing that wrong again. for example I've do micromanaging in my time in the past that really really regret about it and I will not doing it again in the future. that's That's why learning from our experience is much better than a books but I don't say that we don't need to read a book
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