Task #1 - 1
The question:
Describe a special opportunity you have had to improve your skills or knowledge. Explain why this opportunity was important to you and how it benefited your personal or professional development.
My Answer transcript:
I'd say the most special opportunity that I had in the past is I met my mentor while I'm postgrade MBA. and because of this mentor he held in a mentoring session every Wednesday and I joined it consistently. because of it I can discuss with him and another mentee about my business or my problem of professional problems such a kind. for example it helps me a lot to improve my revenue
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Delivery: 3
The response is generally coherent and understandable. However, there are some minor errors in sentence structure and punctuation that slightly affect the flow of the response.
Language Use: 2.5
The language use is generally appropriate, but there are some errors in word choice and grammar that hinder clarity and precision. Some sentences could be improved for better clarity and fluency.
Topic Development: 2.5
The response addresses the prompt by describing a special opportunity with a mentor during the postgraduate MBA program. However, the response lacks specific details and examples to support how this opportunity improved skills or knowledge. It mentions discussing business and professional problems but does not elaborate on the specific benefits or outcomes.
Overall, the response partially addresses the prompt, but it could be further developed with more specific examples and clearer language use.
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Task #1 - 2
The question:
Discuss a unique method or approach you believe is effective in making new friends. Provide specific details and examples to support your viewpoint.
My Answer transcript:
Making new friend never be easy for everyone but if I had to choose what method to approach a better possibility to make new friends I would say do it candor or may make sure you're not so flattering to your new friends. because if you are doing honest you can get their trust and also you can put your trust on them. for example I met my friend that became my special friend of business and at the first time I met him he talked about bad things of me and it's okay
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Delivery: 3
The response is generally coherent and understandable. There are some minor errors in sentence structure and punctuation that slightly affect the flow of the response.
Language Use: 2.5
The language use is generally appropriate, but there are some errors in word choice, grammar, and clarity that hinder the effectiveness of the response. Some sentences could be rephrased for better clarity and precision.
Topic Development: 2
The response addresses the prompt by suggesting that being candid and not overly flattering is an effective approach to making new friends. However, the explanation is limited and lacks specific details and examples to support the viewpoint. The example provided about meeting a friend who talked about bad things is not clear and doesn't effectively illustrate the approach being discussed.
Overall, the response partially addresses the prompt, but it could be further developed with more specific examples and clearer language use to support the viewpoint on making new friends.
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Task #1 - 3
The question:
Narrate an event from your life that holds great significance to you. Elaborate on why this event was important and how it influenced your perspective, aspirations, or values.
My Answer transcript:
I'd say the most memorable event that has great significance to me is when I passed the undergrad a past that I accept on very good University in my country. because I never expect before that I can get the top number one University in my country and my family never done before. and for example my family really proud of me and of course I proud of myself and since then I have better future I think because of it
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Delivery: 3.5
The response is generally coherent and understandable. There are a few minor errors in sentence structure and punctuation, but they do not significantly impact the overall delivery.
Language Use: 3
The language use is generally appropriate, but there are some errors in word choice and grammar that slightly hinder clarity and precision. Some sentences could be revised for better fluency and coherence.
Topic Development: 2.5
The response addresses the prompt by narrating the event of passing the undergraduate program and being accepted into a top university. However, the explanation of why this event was significant and how it influenced the individual's perspective, aspirations, or values is limited. The response briefly mentions family pride and expectations but does not provide specific details or examples to support the impact on future aspirations or values.
Overall, the response partially addresses the prompt by narrating the event, but it could be further developed with more specific details and examples to support the significance of the event and its influence on the individual's perspective, aspirations, or values.
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Task #1 - 4
The question:
State whether you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Education should focus more on practical skills rather than theoretical knowledge." Support your stance with specific reasons and examples.
My Answer transcript:
I don't agree with the statement I think education should not focus more on practical skills. just because not every knowledge in University or school can easy to be practice for example the anthropology discipline. if we want to practical on those kind of knowledge it's really difficult and really wasting our time because for example just one experiment maybe it takes six to one year that it's supposed to be knowing that theory is enough to make students getting better about the knowledge
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Delivery: 3
The response is generally coherent and understandable. There are some minor errors in sentence structure and punctuation, but they do not significantly impact the overall delivery.
Language Use: 3
The language use is generally appropriate, but there are some errors in word choice and grammar that slightly hinder clarity and precision. Some sentences could be revised for better fluency and coherence.
Topic Development: 2.5
The response addresses the prompt by stating disagreement with the statement that education should focus more on practical skills. The reason provided is that not all knowledge can be easily practiced, using the example of anthropology. However, the explanation is limited and lacks specific examples to support the stance. The response could benefit from further development and elaboration on the reasons and examples to better support the argument against prioritizing practical skills over theoretical knowledge.
Overall, the response partially addresses the prompt by expressing disagreement, but it could be further developed with more specific reasons and examples to support the stance on the balance between practical skills and theoretical knowledge in education.
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Task #1 - 5
The question:
Do you agree or disagree with the idea that technology has made our lives easier? Use specific details and examples to justify your opinion.
My Answer transcript:
I absolutely I agree that the technology has made our lives much more easier than ever. because of Technology we are connected more across the globe friend and family can connect even if on different time and separated by this tent. for example I have a friends on Europe and we call each other maybe once a week and it's really nice to talk with him through the internet especially for online meeting and it makes our life much more better
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Delivery: 3.5
The response is generally coherent and understandable. There are a few minor errors in sentence structure and punctuation, but they do not significantly impact the overall delivery.
Language Use: 3.5
The language use is generally appropriate, with a good range of vocabulary and sentence structures. There are a few errors in word choice and grammar, but they do not hinder understanding.
Topic Development: 3.5
The response addresses the prompt by expressing agreement with the idea that technology has made our lives easier. The response provides specific details and examples to support the opinion, highlighting the ability to connect with friends and family across the globe and the convenience of online communication. The examples illustrate how technology has improved the quality of life.
Overall, the response effectively addresses the prompt by expressing agreement, providing specific details and examples to justify the opinion that technology has made our lives easier.
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Task #1 - 6
The question:
Express your viewpoint on the statement: "Having a diverse workforce leads to better creativity and innovation." Support your position with specific examples and details.
My Answer transcript:
Of course I agree that gravity and innovation must be on the work environment because it leads with a creativity and innovation. because if we are do homogeneous or we are same from the first place and never get this to distinguish our ideas, never be done some debate, or critique each other, it couldn't be any Innovation or creativity a cure. that's why many conflict happened before and following innovation in the past
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Delivery: 3.5
The response is generally coherent and understandable. There are a few minor errors in sentence structure and punctuation, but they do not significantly impact the overall delivery.
Language Use: 3
The language use is generally appropriate. There are some errors in word choice and grammar that slightly hinder clarity and precision. Some sentences could be revised for better fluency and coherence.
Topic Development: 2.5
The response addresses the prompt by expressing agreement with the statement that having a diverse workforce leads to better creativity and innovation. The explanation provided mentions the importance of different perspectives, ideas, debates, and critique in fostering innovation and creativity. However, the response lacks specific examples and details to further support the viewpoint. The mention of conflicts related to innovation is not fully developed or clarified.
Overall, the response partially addresses the prompt by expressing agreement and providing a general explanation. To enhance the response, specific examples and more detailed explanations could be added to support the argument that a diverse workforce leads to better creativity and innovation.
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