Task 1
The question:
Describe a memorable event from your childhood and explain why it is significant to you.
My Answer:
I would say the most memorable events on my childhood is the day that I record my scoring score when I done a soccer childhood I remember that day I wrote every single goal that I scored against my friend and it's really impactful until now because since that day I knew that statistic is really good and it's really important for my job right now I do the statistics on a big data and so on it's it is important for me to write down every single numbers of my life
Please do Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 10 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Sure, I'd be happy to assess your response based on the TOEFL iBT rubrics for each category: Delivery, Language Use, and Topic Development. I'll provide a score out of 10 for each rubric.
Delivery (Score: 6/10):
Your delivery is generally clear, but there are some areas for improvement. You provide the necessary information about the memorable event and its significance. However, there are some instances of repetition and sentence structure that could be refined for smoother delivery. Work on varying your intonation and pacing to make your response more engaging and natural.
Language Use (Score: 5/10):
Your language use demonstrates a basic level of proficiency, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect the clarity and flow of your response. For instance, "the day that I record my scoring score" should be "the day when I recorded my scoring." Additionally, "scoring score" is redundant. There are also instances of incorrect verb tenses ("done" instead of "did," "is" instead of "was") and inconsistent word choices ("childhood" instead of "childhood match"). Improving your grammar and vocabulary will enhance the effectiveness of your response.
Topic Development (Score: 5/10):
You address the topic by describing the memorable event from your childhood and briefly explaining its significance. However, your explanation of the event's significance is somewhat vague and lacks specific details. You mention that the event helped you realize the importance of statistics, but you don't elaborate on how this realization impacted your current job or why statistics are important. Developing your explanation with more specific examples and details would strengthen your response.
Overall Total Score: 16/30
Your response shows potential, but there is room for improvement in terms of delivery, language use, and topic development. Focus on organizing your ideas clearly, using accurate grammar and vocabulary, and providing specific examples to support your points. Practicing these aspects will help you enhance your TOEFL iBT responses.
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Task 2
Reading Passage:
The Library's New Borrowing Policy
Dear Students,
We are excited to announce a change in our library's borrowing policy to enhance your reading experience. Starting from next semester, the borrowing period for all books will be extended from two weeks to four weeks. This change is aimed at providing you with ample time to explore and engage with the materials thoroughly. Additionally, renewals will now be allowed for up to two times, provided that no other students have placed a hold on the book. We believe that this new policy will encourage more in-depth research and promote a greater understanding of the subjects you are studying.
Sincerely,
The University Library Team
Listening Passage:
Student A: Hey, have you heard about the new library policy?
Student B: No, what's the update?
Student A: They're extending the borrowing period for books from two weeks to four weeks!
Student B: Really? That's awesome! So, we'll have more time to read and study.
Student A: Exactly! And guess what? You can renew the book twice now, as long as no one else wants it.
Student B: Wow, that's a game-changer. I always wished I could keep books a bit longer for research.
Student A: Me too! I think this will make studying much more convenient.
The question:
Summarize the changes in the library's borrowing policy as discussed in the conversation between the two students. Include details about the extended borrowing period and the renewal options. Then express your opinion on how these changes might impact students' studying habits and research strategies.
My Answer:
The library has a plan to extend borrowing period for students from 2 weeks to 4 weeks it's attention from the library to for students to explore and more engaged thoroughly to the books. moreover there is another change that the renew policy now could be twice. I agree with the conversation with from the two students that this kind of policy is really helpful for students especially for the ones who do deep research on their final project for example I have myself I found very adversity when I don't have my book because the book is already have to return to the library
Please do Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 10 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Certainly, I'll assess your response based on the TOEFL iBT rubrics for each category: Delivery, Language Use, and Topic Development. I'll provide a score out of 10 for each rubric.
Delivery (Score: 8/10):
Your delivery is clear and straightforward. You accurately summarize the changes in the library's borrowing policy as discussed in the conversation between the two students. Your response is concise and effectively conveys the main points. Your tone is neutral and objective, which aligns well with the task requirements.
Language Use (Score: 7/10):
Your language use demonstrates a good level of proficiency, with only a few minor errors and awkward phrasings. For instance, "it's attention from the library" should be "it's an intention of the library." Additionally, "more engaged thoroughly" can be rephrased as "more thoroughly engaged." While your response is generally clear, refining your grammar and word choices can enhance the overall fluency and coherence of your response.
Topic Development (Score: 8/10):
You provide a comprehensive summary of the changes in the library's borrowing policy, covering the extended borrowing period and the new renewal options. Additionally, you express your agreement with the students' conversation and provide a personal example to support your opinion. Your explanation of how the changes might impact students' studying habits and research strategies is clear and relevant. Providing more specific examples could further strengthen your response.
Overall Total Score: 23/30
Your response effectively addresses the key points of the conversation, provides relevant details, and presents your opinion in a well-structured manner. With a few refinements in language use and additional supporting examples, your response could become even stronger. Keep practicing to improve your grammar and vocabulary while maintaining a clear and concise delivery of your ideas.
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Task 3
Reading Passage:
The reading passage discusses the historical event known as the "Industrial Revolution." It outlines the causes and consequences of this transformative period in history, highlighting the shift from agrarian societies to industrialized economies. The passage explains how advancements in technology, such as steam engines and mechanized manufacturing, led to significant societal changes and urbanization. It also touches upon the challenges faced by workers during this time, including poor working conditions and the rise of labor movements advocating for workers' rights.
Listening Passage:
The listening lecture elaborates on the Industrial Revolution discussed in the reading passage. The speaker emphasizes the role of key inventions like the spinning jenny and the power loom in driving the revolution. They delve into the impact of the new factory system on both the economy and society, including the creation of a working class and the emergence of industrial cities. The lecturer further explores the reactions of workers to harsh conditions and their eventual efforts to form labor unions. The significance of the Industrial Revolution in shaping modern economies and societies is underscored.
The question:
Summarize the main points of the reading passage about the Industrial Revolution and explain how the lecturer's perspective adds to your understanding of the topic. Include key insights from both the reading and the lecture.
My Answer:
The reading message is talk about Industrial Revolution that move from agrarian a society into industrialized Society, for tomorrow the reading passage mentioned about Steam machine that founded on Industrial Revolution that cause manufacturing Revolution on our society. moreover the professor elaborate more about this topic she gives some example of this that spinning jenny and Power Loom already revolutionize our factory system But not only until that system but also on the working class or divided and employee have reaction effort to creating Union because they are struggling to find a win-win solution between machineries and employees
Please do Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 10 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Certainly, I'll assess your response based on the TOEFL iBT rubrics for each category: Delivery, Language Use, and Topic Development. I'll provide a score out of 10 for each rubric.
Delivery (Score: 6/10):
Your delivery is somewhat clear, but there are areas that need improvement. You attempt to convey the main points of the reading passage and the lecturer's perspective, but there are instances of unclear phrasing and grammatical errors that affect the clarity of your response. Focus on articulating your ideas more distinctly and maintaining a consistent pace to enhance the overall delivery.
Language Use (Score: 5/10):
Your language use has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that impact the coherence of your response. For example, "move from agrarian a society into industrialized Society" should be "transition from agrarian societies to industrialized societies." Additionally, "for tomorrow the reading passage mentioned about Steam machine" is unclear; it seems like there might be a misunderstanding of the original content. Working on improving your grammar and using accurate vocabulary will contribute to a clearer and more effective response.
Topic Development (Score: 5/10):
While you attempt to summarize the main points of both the reading passage and the lecture, your response lacks precision and coherence. The points you mention are somewhat fragmented, and there is a lack of depth in your explanation. You could provide more specific insights from both the reading and the lecture to show a deeper understanding of the topic, such as explaining the role of the spinning jenny and the power loom in the factory system or elaborating on the significance of the working class's reactions and the formation of labor unions.
Overall Total Score: 16/30
Your response attempts to address the key aspects of the question but lacks clarity, accuracy, and depth in your delivery, language use, and topic development. Focusing on improving your grammar, using more precise vocabulary, and providing specific insights from the reading and lecture will help enhance your TOEFL iBT responses.
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Task 4
Listening Passage:
Lecturer: Good morning, everyone. Today, we'll be discussing the evolution of modern architecture and its impact on urban landscapes. Modern architecture emerged during the late 19th and early 20th centuries as a response to the changing societal and technological landscape. It's characterized by clean lines, functional design, and the use of new construction materials such as steel, glass, and concrete.
One of the significant movements within modern architecture is the International Style, which emphasized simplicity, form follows function, and the rejection of ornate decorations. Architects like Le Corbusier and Mies van der Rohe were pioneers of this movement, designing structures that emphasized open spaces, large windows, and minimalistic design elements.
The influence of modern architecture can be seen in many iconic buildings worldwide, such as the Bauhaus school in Germany and the Seagram Building in New York City. These structures reshaped skylines and urban environments, promoting a new way of thinking about the relationship between people and their surroundings.
In summary, modern architecture revolutionized the field by embracing innovative materials, minimalist design principles, and a focus on functionality. Its impact can still be felt in contemporary urban planning and architectural design.
The question:
Summarize the key characteristics of modern architecture and its significance in shaping urban landscapes. Provide examples of notable architects and buildings associated with the International Style movement.
My Answer:
Director is talk about the architect on the modern of our life that began on late '90s it remarks on use of clean lines and also new materials such as steel glasses and concrete. the lecturer mentioned about two notable prominent architect that provide International style for Simplicity and emphasize of open spaces and it's reshape our view into the architect building and on the point of view of people and surrounding because of it we have to planning not only on the building but also embracing the impact on urban planning such as a skyscraper on the New York City it should be collaborate and synchronized with urban planning of the city
Please do Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 10 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
Certainly, I'll assess your response based on the TOEFL iBT rubrics for each category: Delivery, Language Use, and Topic Development. I'll provide a score out of 10 for each rubric.
Delivery (Score: 7/10):
Your delivery is clear and mostly understandable. You attempt to convey the key characteristics of modern architecture and its significance in shaping urban landscapes. Your tone is neutral and objective, which is appropriate for this type of response. However, there are some areas where your delivery could be smoother, with slightly improved intonation and pacing for better engagement.
Language Use (Score: 6/10):
Your language use shows an understanding of the topic, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect the clarity and flow of your response. For instance, "Director is talk about the architect on the modern of our life" could be rephrased as "The lecturer discusses modern architecture's impact on our lives." Additionally, "prominent architect that provide International style for Simplicity" should be "prominent architects who provided the International Style for its simplicity." Improving your grammar and vocabulary will enhance the effectiveness of your response.
Topic Development (Score: 7/10):
You summarize the key characteristics of modern architecture, including the use of clean lines and new materials, and its significance in reshaping urban landscapes. You also mention notable architects associated with the International Style and provide an example of how skyscrapers like those in New York City impact urban planning. However, your explanation of the International Style movement's emphasis on open spaces and minimalistic design could be further elaborated with more specific examples or details from the lecture.
Overall Total Score: 20/30
Your response effectively conveys the main points of the lecture, but there is still room for improvement in terms of language use and providing more detailed insights. Focusing on refining your grammar and vocabulary, as well as providing richer examples and explanations, will help enhance your TOEFL iBT responses.
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